tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-856008199150957868.post6010231564188513008..comments2014-07-31T16:17:01.554-07:00Comments on Lauren's Thoughts and Poetry: Beside YouAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01004899185881206120noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-856008199150957868.post-36250968725287438242011-05-19T20:38:06.149-07:002011-05-19T20:38:06.149-07:00Dan, you are on point as usual..it was definitely ...Dan, you are on point as usual..it was definitely forced..I knew that and just put it out there anyway. thank you!! I always appreciate your honesty and constructive critism:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01004899185881206120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-856008199150957868.post-71646595725677740052011-05-18T07:06:27.572-07:002011-05-18T07:06:27.572-07:00Lauren.. you certainly are a talented poet.. Howev...Lauren.. you certainly are a talented poet.. However.. I do feel as if this one was slightly forced and it doesnt flow as well as some of your others. But beautiful none-the-less :)ifiwereapighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02932395003439268329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-856008199150957868.post-9678160877675809922011-05-16T12:47:05.101-07:002011-05-16T12:47:05.101-07:00Wonderful ode on the redemptive power of love. Aga...Wonderful ode on the redemptive power of love. Again, you are a genius at using emotional imagery; so mant great ones here: the rollercoster ride, the hands held tight, the aching heart, the shining moon. Wow, just superb poetry!Tony Nunezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241711763275780274noreply@blogger.com